Last Night

Girl let me put your mind at peace. Watch how the temperature increase. As I whisper in your ear taking away your fear. Leaving you with passiontate tears. Plus your body is fill with compassion. Tall tee panties on I love your ghetto fashion. Lights camara action I drawn to this sexually attraction. I know that your body is aching so lets start the healing. The lights are dim damn girl I'm loving this feelings. From the first time that we met the passion was burning. Now as our bodies collides I can feel the temperature changing. We're on a sexually journey so let me explore your body. Passionate screams as I touch your body. Consume with dedication this is sexuall education. And girl cloud nine is our only destination.

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/17/2009 9:56:00 AM

very real and tender Light & Love Try my Baptism of Desire ;)

Dion Bess

Date: 9/15/2009 7:55:00 AM

ok sense you ask I'm going to write onje just for ya ladies when i get the chance probably sometime todnay

Jay Loveless

Date: 9/10/2009 11:34:00 AM

Love The Last Line. Tell Yah Girl Shes Damn Lucky Lol. She Probably Already Knows But Tell Her Anyways For Me =) Nice Work Here, Short And Sweet, But I Know You Got That Passion Bottled Up Inside, Let It Out And Give Us One Hot Sexy Steamy Scene. Melt Us Ladies With Your Writing Dion. I Know You Can Do It, So Show Us. [This Is My Challange For You Lol xD ]

Sue Mason

Date: 8/22/2009 10:42:00 AM

Love the last line here, Dion ... great write!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/15/2009 11:45:00 PM

I can't wait for the next part, Dion. You offer such a sensual quality in a very sophistocated manner. Lovely poem! Blessings, Carolyn