Last Leap

Built by need
Desires kept deep
I gave my soul
In my last leap

Just a hollow tunnel
Thoughts went to sleep
Blocking any heartache
In my last leap

Emptiness consumes me
Memories no longer I keep
Rejected beyond words
In my last leap

Slain by stupidity
By a mountain so steep
I will die in the desert
In my last leap

Cast me into eternity
I have sewn all I can reap
Happiness once more rejects me
In my last leap

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 7/27/2008 4:53:00 AM
Teresa - This poem flowed and rhymed well I loved the way each stanza ended with common lines - I want you to know that after our greatest tribulations will come our greatest triumphs - Stay strong and better days will follow - Blessings always
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Date: 7/27/2008 2:25:00 AM
Dear Teresa, whatever you are going through, hang in there for it shall soon pass. There is a brighter tomorrow, please believe. We are all feeling you, as so many of us have been there. With love, Shar
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Date: 7/26/2008 9:59:00 PM
I am in the habbit of always writing about god.When I got saved all want to do is pray to god with letters of poems or just words.After that I got a pet and that completed it,I got it as a baby so it could grow with me.
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Date: 7/26/2008 8:54:00 PM
Teresa another sad poem, you know what no matter how dark those days are, you have people here that really care about each other. So you are not alone you have many friends, God Bless and Keep you, Ron
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