Last Hurrah

Sunset on the beach
My shadow stretches out to
Grasp the last daylight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Tacito Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 8:48 AM
Yes, absolutely! Embrance the sunsets & the colored skies. Wonderfully done!
Montgomery Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 11:51 AM
Thanks, Drake! What a nice comment!
Andresen Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 3:23 AM
... Wooow, Molly !!! - Well done haiku...love it!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Montgomery Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 11:49 AM
Thanks, Anne Lise! Xo to you, too! :-)
Mohammed Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 3:13 AM
Lovely Haiku. I really like it.
Montgomery Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 11:47 AM
Thanks, Mustapha! I'm trying to figure out Haiku!
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