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Last Hoorah

Final rocket An empty box Tumble drier's Lonely socks Rabbit's foot Now key-ring hangs Dracula Retires his fangs Satellite Back down to Earth Millionaire Rejects his worth Shoe's lost sole Beyond repair Luscious locks Now absent hair Tasty cheese Now furry mould Fervent love Gone icy cold Sunset fire Yet, clouds obscure Common cold They found a cure Friendship Folded, packed away A coloured life Just fades to grey Life's a test But have we passed? Results come due As breathe our last CV 10.9.23

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Date: 11/9/2023 9:13:00 PM
An interesting poem. It reminds us that all things eventually change. Very good.
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Cynthia Vipond
Date: 11/9/2023 10:08:00 PM
Thanks Hilda, dear x

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