Last Goodbyes

Nobody knew it would be their last goodbye
On a day not unlike many others
The sun still ascending into the sky
Waving goodbye to their fathers and mothers
 
No warning to give a prolonged hug
Or to repeat, “I love you” again
No reason to put aside the coffee mug
To kiss them as the day did begin
 
Nobody knew of the tragedy just hours away
And the thin ice upon which we walk
The torment of wondering if your child is okay
The breaking of a parent’s heart
 
Watching parent and child reunited
While others still stand there alone
Feeling guilty to be so excited
That your child will be coming home
 
Twenty plus angels ascended to heaven
On the river of a nation’s tears
Be thankful for every day you are given
To hug your children throughout the years
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Cooper Avatar
December 20, 2012 at 1:43 PM
wow great minds must think alike I just wrote a poem called mortals bleed. about the same subject. Your rendition is a lot better then mine :)
Williams Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 10:16 AM
Joe, really difficult subject, very well done...David
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December 17, 2012 at 7:52 PM
A heartbreaking write that touches the soul, thanks for writing this and sharing. Hugs
Dietrich Avatar
December 17, 2012 at 7:38 PM
this is an awesome poem about a very tragic event. One of the best I have read here on this topic. Bless you for writing a poem this sincere, Joe.
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