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Last Forever

i see you looking up in the sky tears from your eyes you didnt have the chance to say goodbye feeling alone inside right after i died -i know that you are there weeping sorrow you are my treasure but you got to know my love for you will last forever- living your life looking down at you used to be my wife i see nothing new but you gotta know my love for you will last forever ....forever --sorry i can't think of anything....sorry i give up on this one..--

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Date: 3/29/2010 8:49:00 AM
Very good....just to let u know u are not a bad poet because I loved it
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Date: 3/28/2010 9:08:00 PM
that was a great poem and thanx for the comment on my wall. you are a good poet. what are you talking about. you are great.
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Date: 3/28/2010 5:14:00 PM
waiting to here the rest...
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