Last Forever

i see you looking up
in the sky
tears from your eyes
you didnt have the chance to say goodbye
feeling alone 
inside
right after i 
died

-i know that you are there
weeping sorrow
you are my treasure
but you got to know
my love for you
will last
forever-

living your life
looking down at you
used to be my wife
i see nothing new
but you gotta know
my love for you
will last 
forever
....forever
 

--sorry i can't think of anything....sorry i give up on this one..--
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Bateman Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 8:49 AM
Very good....just to let u know u are not a bad poet because I loved it
Bateman Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 9:08 PM
that was a great poem and thanx for the comment on my wall. you are a good poet. what are you talking about. you are great.
Culverhouse Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 5:14 PM
waiting to here the rest...
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