Last Day

I now it my last day mum you don’t have to make a fuss
If you do I mate miss the bus
No don’t even cry 
Your embarrass me and in front of that guy
Oh mum ill see you later 
I’ve got to catch me mate
That traitor
The little brat ran of with me money
I’m getting it back and she better not call me honey
Oh mum ill be back in 6 hours
See you later and feed the rabbits

should i go to unverrite are stay at home
should i get more educaitin
are lay low
should i be cleever 
are stay at home
i now im note good with my speelins
but i dont mone
its like stand at a cross road which way should i go
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Sanders Avatar
January 30, 2013 at 10:27 AM
This is the conversation I'm looking for. Keep writing I'm litsenning.
Burd Avatar
November 1, 2012 at 5:08 PM
you've illustrated the frustration and haste of the moment very well. thanks for sharing;)
Bell Avatar
November 2, 2012 at 11:41 AM
THANKS AND A MONSTER IN MY CLOSET WAS SO FUNNYY I HOPE THERE IS NOT ONE IN MY CLOSET
Brown Avatar
November 1, 2012 at 4:47 PM
An excellent piece you have shared with us Miriam. I have enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Will be back soon to read more. Love, Carol
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November 1, 2012 at 3:00 PM
Miriam, i like the story,,, hope the rabbits are well fed while you take care of you,,,..always~pd
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