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Last Conclusion

~           JUDGEMENT          ~ 

~~  teeth deep in the ground
~~~ alligator skin like knifes 
~~~~~~ listening to lies

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Poet Destroyer A

December 11, 2013 at 1:37 AM

yes love

Michael J. Falotico

January 15, 2011 at 5:20 AM

Another well written Haiku!!!! you have mastered this form my dear....always Michael

Andrea Dietrich

January 14, 2011 at 10:01 PM

This pierces sharply!

Gert W. Knop

January 9, 2011 at 9:24 AM

Great picture you've penned here! Have a nice week!...Gert

Harry Horsman

December 30, 2010 at 6:38 AM

enjoyed this, Harry

Ravindra K Kapoor

December 30, 2010 at 1:59 AM

It is more than beautiful a remarkable sketch on Judgment. So deep and so true. Thanks for your appreciation of Rain, the Story. Love and best wishes for the new year 2011....Ravindra

David Smalling

December 27, 2010 at 8:02 AM

Powerful

Linda Witt-King

December 12, 2010 at 2:48 AM

Wow, there's a picture...check out my first blog posting, Hathor

Andrea Dietrich

November 29, 2010 at 9:41 PM

oooooh, this is really nice!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 29, 2010 at 6:49 AM

A well deserved featured poem you have here Hathor. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Sheri Fresonke Harper

November 28, 2010 at 8:32 PM

How very interesting and true, good work

Nette Onclaud

November 26, 2010 at 8:03 AM

what depth and powerful use of metaphors, hathor! beautiful.. thanks for coming by my poetic cave with your generous remarks on my"divorce" poem.. warmest, nette