Last Choice

Here I am.
Standing on the very edge of the cliff...
I look at you, your eyes like gems.
I jump off. You say “only if”

But I don’t hear the rest...
My only explanation is I’m too sick.
Too sick of you pretending, thinking you’re the best.
It felt all way too quick...

I look down, suddenly scared.
I will fall and no one will catch me.
I am so unprepared.
Young forever... is that all I will ever be?

Three feet away from the hard, solid ground.
All the memories flash right there.
I’m starting to regret my last choice, turn the clock the other way around.
Where will I go now? Please tell me where...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/4/2011 8:14:00 PM
Thx for the support guys! Especially Marie :)
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Date: 5/4/2011 7:54:00 PM
congrats on the honorable mention, sofia :)
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Date: 5/4/2011 8:58:00 AM
You get to go anywhere you choose! Love the great metaphors!
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Date: 5/2/2011 5:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Sofia. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/2/2011 4:06:00 AM
Congratulations Sofia on your win in Jimmy's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/1/2011 1:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Sofia
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Date: 4/8/2011 6:16:00 PM
Thanks all for supporttig me. I'm just starting out with poetry, and I'm really enjoying it :). I entered oe of my poems in the next contest. Do you have any constructive critisism to give me? Love, Sofia
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Date: 4/5/2011 4:32:00 PM
so expressive... love the theme... age old die for love
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Date: 4/5/2011 7:02:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry Sofia. I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of it soon. May you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/5/2011 6:28:00 AM
Creative expressions with meaningful thoughts, Sofia
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Date: 4/5/2011 4:47:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your poetry with it's creative theme.. hope your time on P.S. is filled with fun and sharing with luv... our contests are free to enter ..so please check them out ..and good luck with luv..
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