Greg Hoffman Poet Rhyme

Last Call

Another night, the end is near
Just enough time for one more beer
Pockets empty, fighting a yawn
It's time to go, the beer is gone


Contest: Triple Prompt-Hear the Calling
Sponsored by: Casarah Nance
Written: 10/24/2015

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Funom Makama January 14, 2016 at 11:28 AM #7 truly underrates this magnificent piece.. Absolutely brilliant

Skat A October 27, 2015 at 10:01 PM Greg, Wonderful win. SKAT

Casarah Nance October 26, 2015 at 2:24 PM This was funny and made me laugh out loud, grats on your win Greg Hoffman October 26, 2015 at 3:16 PM Thanks for running the contest,it was fun. I liked the multiple prompts because sometimes one just isn't enough

Andrea Dietrich October 25, 2015 at 6:30 PM aha, you were thinking on MY lines!! I just love that rock song: Closing time. WEll done here. Greg Hoffman October 26, 2015 at 2:54 PM Great minds think alike lol, well one great mind anyway not to sure about mine. Thanks for stopping by and commenting