Last Breath of a Forgotten Dream

All the passion that was brewing inside
Raging desires that engulfed your mind 

Beaten and broken yet survived every time
I was your reason, your ultimate rhyme 

Mountains on shoulders that crushed your heart
Poisoned your soul to tear me apart

To lodge in conformity; the glorified lie
You stopped believing, Today I die
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Whisper  Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 2:30 PM
for some reasons , these lines made me cry !! so beautiful !!! good job :)
Moth Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 6:07 AM
Thank you very much. Its nice to hear someone was moved by this. Hope i didn't bring up too much bad stuff. Sorry for the late reply.
Gi-Sa Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 11:03 AM
Great stuff!
Gauthier Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 7:47 AM
Awesome and powerful poem. Congrats.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 9:40 AM
You have a potent and poignant pen, I really enjoy your style. Welcome to Poetry Soup! xo mo
Moth Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 3:33 AM
Thank you very much. I have been replying to the comments but they somehow didn'd get posted. So sorry for that
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