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Last Breath

They say Trees breathe in, What we Exhale. I watched you take your last breath, I've missed you since. I just wonder, if the tree feels as lucky as I do. Knowing, That you're a part of its life now.

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Date: 11/29/2022 6:52:00 PM
Oh wow! What a beauty this poem is! Thank you for sharing. A fav
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Steve Coleman
Date: 11/29/2022 6:56:00 PM
Thank you very much. I tried to change it, still trying to figure it out... lol
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/29/2022 6:54:00 PM
Why’ve you listed this as an Acrostic?

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