Last Breath

They say Trees breathe in,
What we Exhale.

I watched you take your last breath,
I've missed you since. 

I just wonder, if the tree feels as lucky as I do.
Knowing,
That you're a part of its life now.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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November 29, 2022 at 6:52 PM
Oh wow! What a beauty this poem is! Thank you for sharing. A fav
Coleman Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 6:56 PM
Thank you very much. I tried to change it, still trying to figure it out... lol
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November 29, 2022 at 6:54 PM
Why’ve you listed this as an Acrostic?
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