Last Autumn--Revised

The river is at autumnal peace
The spring runoff months long past.
The sun has mellowed, shrinking shadows.
Birds that once graced this glade
Have assayed the air and arched the horizon.
There is a gentleness in grass and tree—
A gentleness that reminds me of me.

My life’s season too is settling up,
Signed by silent, sober resignation.
What I once was, I am no more
My river has slowed to a feeble flow.
Legs that once fit me to jump and leap
Now struggle my balance to keep.

I see in nature’s changing trappings
Reflections of what is afoot for this form.
All of God's living things signal a cycle
Of orderly, ordained necrosis and renewal.
The river and sun and grass and tree
Are of the nature that is a part of me.

Sleep-needful eyes too heavy one day
Will tearlessly close in all being’s way.
I do not abhor the closing of the door.
My angel Mother whispered "there is more."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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September 8, 2015 at 2:00 PM
Paul, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the home page. **SKAT**
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September 8, 2015 at 9:07 PM
Thank you, SKAT A. It's kind of you to notice and to take time to congratulate me. I appreciate it.
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May 3, 2015 at 9:53 PM
Please note that I extensively edited the original version of this poem. That may or may not have been helpful, but I thought I should inform you about it. In any event (sigh), life will go on.
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May 3, 2015 at 3:07 AM
Wonderful pen Paul!I surely enjoyed reading your very nice piece dear friend. Fall is so magical and soft.A 7 from me!Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you!:) D.
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May 3, 2015 at 8:21 AM
Thank you, Dorian. You are always gracious and supportive—qualities that are hallmarks of your comments and that I deeply appreciate. I sincerely hope all is well with you and your loved ones.
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