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Last and First

Fall; unlike privileged non dreamers that take the risk by swallowing, and slowly letting life trail behind them, without the thought of the next tomorrow, and the next tomorrow, and the next tomorrow. Glide down swiftly, as if your only dream came close by end, and captured waves of sun joined, in one last warmth, that you never knew you could ware. Last and First.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/7/2010 8:22:00 PM
Hey gurl! It's your turn! Send me an email..a poem for collab. k? hugs, your friend, Jimmy
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Date: 5/3/2010 8:32:00 AM
This calls for introspection by all of us, Jessica.."Last and First." Goes to my favs..Thank you for reading and leaving your comments on mine..Love, audrey
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Date: 5/1/2010 2:24:00 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 4/28/2010 11:45:00 PM
Jeesica the title means 'eat with me' a kind of rsvp .Thanks for your interest in my poetry endeavours.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/27/2010 3:44:00 AM
well done enjoyed the expression you have here,..p.d.
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