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Last a While

In this moment, I fade into, An infant sense of time, Man and earth all disappear, Can’t define a me from you, We’ve travelled so long, so far, To reach this place that we find, What’s been left away to hide, What’s inside becomes alive, A lonely clock stands still to smile, Watching friends fly on by, Hands held up in serenity, Letting seconds last a while.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/18/2024 11:53:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/18/2016 1:17:00 PM
Shane, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/6/2015 1:27:00 PM
SHANE, Enjoyed reading your poem today. LUV **SKAT**
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