Lassie's Song

Joyfully chasing blue tail bunny rabbits through fields of dancing daisies 
Watercolour skies in lavender hues reflecting from, her marmalade moon...
Mystical monarch butterflies brushed amid glittering orange as black; gathering 
About Tinkerbell with her gentle maroon, magical wand silverish trails waving atop
Cheerful cherry blossoms while calling to Lassie from across this motif meadows
Musical and picturesque scene; Autumn's cresendo dreams ? Crossing evanescents
Evergreen pastel forest with its translucent trees; met by a school of sprites led by
Peter Pan smiling at his girl as he takes her by her lovely hand whispering words..
Chimes their love majestics, tangerine notes meridians metaphorical, welcome home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/1/2013 2:08:00 PM
How wonderful it would be, to be guided through Never Land, by Peter Pan himself!....I am still a kid at heart, and I hope I never do grow up!....Great whimsical poem here! I think you might enjoy my poem titled, "A Kid At Heart". Please, read it sometime. Love, Kelly
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Date: 8/15/2013 10:13:00 PM
I enjoy reading this poem. Nice use of metaphors in this piece.
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Date: 8/15/2013 9:11:00 PM
Man if this ain't imagery packed! Great job John! Goodnight. Rest well, soup for me another night. bye bye... :)
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