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Lashes Fair

Fragile bars of jet black, frame, reclaim fallen foe ‘pon fair cheek tamed. The scratch and sting of those misplaced whilst rubbing palm on grimaced face Upturned emphasis of souls delight, caressed by tongue kisses in candlelight, protector of twin orbs rare shadow of all solar glare eye lashes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/18/2009 5:46:00 PM
this poem is lovely x chloe
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Date: 5/14/2009 10:09:00 PM
Lovely write.Thanks for commenting on my poem.Well, I am the girl who was to marry the boy in my poem.She is his real mom and is very cruel in nature.His dad is a gem &has helped her entire family by marrying off her 3 sisters,lending money to her brothers, he does all household work, in addition to giving her house,car&2maids,but loves his diabled son.Now that he is gonna retire ,his salary ceases & its time to get back his handicapped son from special school ,she hates him & has left him.
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Date: 5/9/2009 7:32:00 PM
This is a very original offering here ... Jewish poetry including the Psalms uses this device ... parallelism ... and your have taken it another level ... pure professionalism.
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Date: 5/7/2009 6:00:00 PM
Smile~I love this beautifully laced and adorned write dear lady!!!:):)~"Hello Gifted & Lovely Deborah Guzzi!!!":):)~I hope that "Your" life has been treating "You" tenderly dear!!?:):)~Smile, yes, upon reread, it is such a flowing and amazing portrait which "You" have painted here~"Magnificent!!!":):)~"Warmth & Love Always To 'You & Your Loves,' John!!!":):) Bye ~
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