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LASER

LASER Laser beam you are so focussed All I wish is to be like you Single colour uni-directional Every life's path I wish be so Ray of coherent energy with uses plenty wish I tune my life like you! © Anulaxmi Nayak,2015 31st August 2015

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Date: 9/1/2015 8:21:00 AM
An impressive Acrostic with a message so clear! I am certain your mind has nothing to be jealous of a laser! Excellent and a seven dear, Anulaxmi.
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Anulaxmi Nayak
Date: 9/1/2015 8:28:00 AM
Dear Demetrios, thank you so much....your words made me so happy!...i am appreciative about the LASER and your certainty is certainly certain!love, Anu:)
Date: 9/1/2015 7:39:00 AM
Well said. It is a testament to your sensitive heart. Emile.
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Anulaxmi Nayak
Date: 9/1/2015 7:55:00 AM
Thank you dear Emile, you are incisive in poem analysis.....i like your analysis and i agree with your words.......have a great week ahead...love, Anu:)