Anu Nayak Poet Acrostic

Laser

LASER 
Laser beam you are so focussed
All I wish is to be like you
Single colour uni-directional
Every life's path I wish be so
Ray of coherent energy with uses plenty wish I 
                        tune my life like you!


© Anulaxmi Nayak,2015
     31st August 2015

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Demetrios Trifiatis September 1, 2015 at 8:21 AM An impressive Acrostic with a message so clear! I am certain your mind has nothing to be jealous of a laser! Excellent and a seven dear, Anulaxmi. Anu Nayak September 1, 2015 at 8:28 AM Dear Demetrios, thank you so much....your words made me so happy!...i am appreciative about the LASER and your certainty is certainly certain!love, Anu:)

Emile Pinet September 1, 2015 at 7:39 AM Well said. It is a testament to your sensitive heart. Emile. Anu Nayak September 1, 2015 at 7:55 AM Thank you dear Emile, you are incisive in poem analysis.....i like your analysis and i agree with your words.......have a great week ahead...love, Anu:)