Lanterne As a Quaternion

WINTER
in
anger-
whips up the waves,
pounds the shingle
shore
SPRING
in
action-
brings to life
and feathers its
nest
SUMMER
so 
lazy-
rests the soul
and flowers the
land
AUTUMN
so
mellow-
scents and sounds
in the harvest
home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Delaney Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 5:20 AM
I enjoyed the way you condensed the seasons making use of the lanterne form and extending it. Cheers, SuZ
Strand Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 6:03 AM
Thank you Suz
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