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The cry of the cockerel before dawn, The overalls she wears are all torn. The weight of the hay bale, The sound of the crow’s wail. The sight of another fence down, Only 4 eggs today Mother will frown. The cat giving birth to yet another litter. Taste of the poor, sick cow’s milk is bitter. The well’s water level is very low. Grass round the house needs a mow. Sheep in back pasture need to be hand fed. Mice yesterday got into the bread. Vegetable patch plants are growing so slow. There's a dance on Friday don’t you know. Can’t get the knots out of her long hair, Can’t go to the dance, has nothing to wear. All this adds plenty to her mental anguish, Guess she will just stay here and languish.

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Date: 11/3/2023 3:45:00 PM
Really enjoyed reading this couplet poem dear SV. The picture accompanies the writing so well. You have expressed her plight so well that the readers heart goes out to her. The poem flows so well with great rhyming as always from you. The ending couplet is so poignant. Loved reading this. Good luck in the contest. Hugs to you for a lovely weekend. Xx
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Date: 11/3/2023 5:22:00 PM
Christina such an uplifting comment. Thank you so very much. The contests give me inspiration of what to write about. Comments like yours and the other comments are my first place wins. You have put a broad smile on my face. Best wishes today and every day from SV
Date: 11/2/2023 12:54:00 PM
I enjoyed your approach to this contest. Languish is such a cool word, and your poem here is cool too.
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Date: 11/2/2023 1:20:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, its a simple one and I am glad you enjoyed it. So nice of you to let me know, its really appreciated. Best wishes from SV
Date: 11/2/2023 10:46:00 AM
Your poem gives us the true feeling of languish.
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Date: 11/2/2023 12:50:00 PM
Exactly what I aimed for my dear friend. Thank you for the confirmation in your comment. Best wishes SV
Date: 11/2/2023 12:10:00 AM
Sounds like a fairy godmother needed - good take on the contest (as always) :)
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Date: 11/2/2023 12:19:00 AM
My wondewrful spell checking friend. You fill that position !!! Thanks a million D.

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