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Landscape of Spring

Let’s go frolic on the landscape of spring And relish jubilant nature’s beauty That satiates our glorious wondering. Exuding brightness from its paths that bring Showers of bliss in limitless bounty Let’s go frolic on the landscape of spring. Bellowing songs of insects and birds ring Thanking God’s love and graces aplenty While flower-trees raise their hands, adoring. Dragonflies and bees swirl around like string As we twirl, butterflies play…so pretty! Let’s all frolic on the landscape of spring. Floral vines boast on high walls, all flaring And balmy breeze drops petals-confetti Catch them under the sunray’s offering. View from the hill the clear lake’s mirroring The rainbow colors with large quantity Let’s all frolic on the landscape of spring That satiates our glorious wondering. May 3, 2022 1.52pm Springtime Villanelle Contest Judged: 5/6/2022 11:07:00 AM Sponsored by: Sotto Poet Place 4 (only the last w)

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Date: 5/9/2022 1:59:00 PM
Hi Len, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/9/2022 9:18:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend Alexis Y for your congratulatory greetings and passing by. Blessings. Hugs
Date: 5/9/2022 9:50:00 AM
Len, great imagery and flow, congratulations on your win in Lassad's Lassad's contest. Blessings
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/9/2022 9:17:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend Eve for stopping by and your congratulatory greetings. Blessings. Hugs
Date: 5/6/2022 8:38:00 PM
"satiates our glorious wondering" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/7/2022 7:07:00 PM
Thank you so much dear friend. God bless you. Hugs
Date: 5/6/2022 12:11:00 PM
Len, Congratulations on winning your placement in my contest. You've written a beautiful poem. Blessings.
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/7/2022 7:07:00 PM
Thank you for your acknowledgment of my poem in your contest my dear Poet Sotto. God bless you. Hugs
Date: 5/3/2022 4:30:00 PM
very nice alternating lines in your villanelle. These are not easy to create. You did great.
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/4/2022 6:37:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my villanelle my dear friend Andrea and for your kind words. You're right. This poem isn't easy. I need to look at the rule once in awhile while making it and quite hard to memorize it.

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