Landscape of Spring

Let’s go frolic on the landscape of spring
And relish jubilant nature’s beauty 
That satiates our glorious wondering.

Exuding brightness from its paths that bring
Showers of bliss in limitless bounty
Let’s go frolic on the landscape of spring.

Bellowing songs of insects and birds ring
Thanking God’s love and graces aplenty 
While flower-trees raise their hands, adoring.

Dragonflies and bees swirl around like string
As we twirl, butterflies play…so pretty!
Let’s all frolic on the landscape of spring.

Floral vines boast on high walls, all flaring
And balmy breeze drops petals-confetti
Catch them under the sunray’s offering.

View from the hill the clear lake’s mirroring
The rainbow colors with large quantity
Let’s all frolic on the landscape of spring
That satiates our glorious wondering.

May 3, 2022    1.52pm


Springtime Villanelle
Contest Judged:  5/6/2022 11:07:00 AM
Sponsored by: Sotto Poet
Place 4 (only the last w)

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Date: 5/9/2022 1:59:00 PM
Hi Len, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/9/2022 9:18:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend Alexis Y for your congratulatory greetings and passing by. Blessings. Hugs
Date: 5/9/2022 9:50:00 AM
Len, great imagery and flow, congratulations on your win in Lassad's Lassad's contest. Blessings
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/9/2022 9:17:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend Eve for stopping by and your congratulatory greetings. Blessings. Hugs
Date: 5/6/2022 8:38:00 PM
"satiates our glorious wondering" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/7/2022 7:07:00 PM
Thank you so much dear friend. God bless you. Hugs
Date: 5/6/2022 12:11:00 PM
Len, Congratulations on winning your placement in my contest. You've written a beautiful poem. Blessings.
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/7/2022 7:07:00 PM
Thank you for your acknowledgment of my poem in your contest my dear Poet Sotto. God bless you. Hugs
Date: 5/3/2022 4:30:00 PM
very nice alternating lines in your villanelle. These are not easy to create. You did great.
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/4/2022 6:37:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my villanelle my dear friend Andrea and for your kind words. You're right. This poem isn't easy. I need to look at the rule once in awhile while making it and quite hard to memorize it.
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