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May 3, 2022    1.52pm

 

Beautiful Girl Nature Park Background Summer Lanshaft Young Romantic Woman  — Stock Photo © miramiska #225673464

Landscape of Spring

Let’s go frolic on the landscape of spring
And relish jubilant nature’s beauty 
That satiates our glorious wondering.

Exuding brightness from its paths that bring
Showers of bliss in limitless bounty
Let’s go frolic on the landscape of spring.

Bellowing songs of insects and birds ring
Thanking God’s love and graces aplenty 
While flower-trees raise their hands, adoring.

Dragonflies and bees swirl around like string
As we twirl, butterflies play…so pretty!
Let’s all frolic on the landscape of spring.

Floral vines boast on high walls, all flaring
And balmy breeze drops petals-confetti
Catch them under the sunray’s offering.

View from the hill the clear lake’s mirroring
The rainbow colors with large quantity
Let’s all frolic on the landscape of spring
That satiates our glorious wondering.
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Gasun Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 12:05 AM
Springtime Villanelle Contest Judged: 5/6/2022 11:07:00 AM Sponsored by: Sotto Poet Place 4 (only the last w)
Y. Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 1:59 PM
Hi Len, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
Gasun Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 9:18 PM
Thank you my dear friend Alexis Y for your congratulatory greetings and passing by. Blessings. Hugs
Roper Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 9:50 AM
Len, great imagery and flow, congratulations on your win in Lassad's Lassad's contest. Blessings
Gasun Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 9:17 PM
Thank you my dear friend Eve for stopping by and your congratulatory greetings. Blessings. Hugs
Alex Avatar
May 6, 2022 at 8:38 PM
"satiates our glorious wondering" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
Gasun Avatar
May 7, 2022 at 7:07 PM
Thank you so much dear friend. God bless you. Hugs
Poet Avatar
May 6, 2022 at 12:11 PM
Len, Congratulations on winning your placement in my contest. You've written a beautiful poem. Blessings.
Gasun Avatar
May 7, 2022 at 7:07 PM
Thank you for your acknowledgment of my poem in your contest my dear Poet Sotto. God bless you. Hugs
Dietrich Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 4:30 PM
very nice alternating lines in your villanelle. These are not easy to create. You did great.
Gasun Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 6:37 PM
Thank you so much for reading my villanelle my dear friend Andrea and for your kind words. You're right. This poem isn't easy. I need to look at the rule once in awhile while making it and quite hard to memorize it.
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