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Landscape

After the fog cleared, I could see. In roughly a few steps from me Exclusive land that reaches the sea Praise God who made it utterly! A long, densely planted tree spree The mood must be darker, mostly. it's a puzzle on cool prairie Praise God who made it utterly! Mystery in the cold, moist air. The houses waited for the snare. The ocean was lost in his angry. Praise God who made it utterly! Old man sits under a pine tree. Tulip tree near shadow's alley. His beard nudges with the calm sea. Praise God who made it utterly! Cross-section of a staunch landscape. Veins like the wind's traces undrape. As seen from drumlin topped species; Praise God who made it utterly! River has kids whirling on ice. Over drift pile green water-scarves. one where hungry ravens can glee Praise God who made it utterly! Being landscape, shedding snow-light. After a snowfall, keep the peace. after a snowfall, keep the Ecstasy Praise God who made it utterly!
Syllables count: HMS.COM Written: September 15, 2021 ''L'' Contest New or Old Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France
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Roy Avatar
September 17, 2021 at 5:10 AM
Your writing skill enables the reader to visualize. An excellent write. Loved the flow. God bless you.
Skelly Avatar
September 17, 2021 at 3:42 AM
God and Nature are entwined in this poem...Well done Lasaad...Delice
Dietrich Avatar
September 16, 2021 at 5:06 PM
WEll done, and I hope it made the winner list.
Trifiatis Avatar
September 16, 2021 at 7:45 AM
A powerful and beautiful poem that glorifies God and nature, my dearest friend, Lasaad! Blessings.
Pandit Avatar
September 16, 2021 at 6:14 AM
Excellent imagery, Lasaad. I like the sound of--praise for god... All the best.
Buhagiar Avatar
September 16, 2021 at 1:48 AM
Great landscape.. Your imagery is beautiful and I like the repeating words. Best for a win.
Roper Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 10:08 PM
Beautiful imagery and a well written verse, , Lasaad, a beautiful photo.
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