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After the fog cleared, I could see. In roughly a few steps from me Exclusive land that reaches the sea Praise God who made it utterly! A long, densely planted tree spree The mood must be darker, mostly. it's a puzzle on cool prairie Praise God who made it utterly! Mystery in the cold, moist air. The houses waited for the snare. The ocean was lost in his angry. Praise God who made it utterly! Old man sits under a pine tree. Tulip tree near shadow's alley. His beard nudges with the calm sea. Praise God who made it utterly! Cross-section of a staunch landscape. Veins like the wind's traces undrape. As seen from drumlin topped species; Praise God who made it utterly! River has kids whirling on ice. Over drift pile green water-scarves. one where hungry ravens can glee Praise God who made it utterly! Being landscape, shedding snow-light. After a snowfall, keep the peace. after a snowfall, keep the Ecstasy Praise God who made it utterly!
Syllables count: HMS.COM Written: September 15, 2021 ''L'' Contest New or Old Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 9/17/2021 5:10:00 AM
Your writing skill enables the reader to visualize. An excellent write. Loved the flow. God bless you.
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Date: 9/17/2021 3:42:00 AM
God and Nature are entwined in this poem...Well done Lasaad...Delice
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Date: 9/16/2021 5:06:00 PM
WEll done, and I hope it made the winner list.
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Date: 9/16/2021 7:45:00 AM
A powerful and beautiful poem that glorifies God and nature, my dearest friend, Lasaad! Blessings.
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Date: 9/16/2021 6:14:00 AM
Excellent imagery, Lasaad. I like the sound of--praise for god... All the best.
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Date: 9/16/2021 1:48:00 AM
Great landscape.. Your imagery is beautiful and I like the repeating words. Best for a win.
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Date: 9/15/2021 10:08:00 PM
Beautiful imagery and a well written verse, , Lasaad, a beautiful photo.
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