Poet Destroyer A Poet Couplet

Land of the Lost

Land of the Lost

Time in time out
What's it all about

Got no freedom
Drunk on rum

Russian roulette full of fun
Empty barrel, trigger gun

Bust a cop
Prison mob

Modern warfare
Lord's prayer

Life's a steal
Keep it real

Living will 
patients bill

File for divorce
Marriage course

False image
True discourage

Hating phase
Finger peace trace

Murder case
Birthplace

Where's my justice
Religion practice

Body full of lies 
the truth dies

Overdrive
Sex thrive

Driver licenses
Fatal expense

Public enemy
Hermit disease

Auspice unity
Combined greedy

Foot prints
Heart dent

Failure to communicate
Achieve to hallucinate

Judged by hypocrite
3 seconds, 3000 kilobits

Every minute matters
For jugglers and gamblers

Every life has a cost
Land of the lost

By: P.D...

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Skat A February 4, 2016 at 11:27 PM so lost **SKAT**

Andrea Dietrich July 26, 2013 at 12:24 AM PD thanks for the recent contest wins. I love seeing my old stuff get shown again.

Debbie Duncan June 29, 2013 at 4:17 PM love it Linda,,, title reminded me of the series Land of The Lost,,, yours is way better ;} thanks for liking my Soul Sucker " ;}

Richard D Seal March 29, 2013 at 9:11 PM Hi Dark One, The monkey sent the monkey, you know, the one you have on a stick, erm me. I hope your starting to feel better, though I know you still have more to come, time will heal. This is a very interesting work, I particularly like "Where's my justice", how often do we ask that question. I'll leave you for now. Do take care of yourself and yours. Regards Richard

Harry Horsman March 26, 2013 at 4:58 PM Hi PD love your couplets,,,

Michelle Degironemo June 1, 2011 at 6:08 AM NICE!!! Who is you by the way???

Jack Horne May 21, 2011 at 11:02 AM Clever, thought provoking couplets, PD.

Amy Sullivan October 29, 2010 at 6:25 AM This one is really super! Rings truth throughout! Amzie

Kabuteng P.Ink K. October 19, 2010 at 9:16 AM hi pd :)-- how are you? i read your comments in my latest post-- yup it's just a poem but took bits and pieces from somewhere--thanks--I guess the rain brought some inspiration with it-- that was an older poem that I've been working on for the past month though & finished it for Frank's contest...enjoy your day now-- :)

Phyllis Babcock September 24, 2010 at 8:18 AM Enjoyed the read. God Bless Phyl

Matthew Anish September 23, 2010 at 1:33 PM Almost like a "rap" poem. Intresting! Have you tried moontown cafe or Soul Fountain yet? Love Matthew Anish

Michael J. Falotico September 12, 2010 at 4:43 PM Very cool write , love your style. The meaning to "washed away". Is a cleansing poem or some old demons. Love your interest hun. Have great evening love. Always Michael

Doreen Cyr September 11, 2010 at 7:28 PM Very thought provoking write for life is contradictory and sometimes confusing. very well written thank you also for your comments doreen

Cecil Hickman September 10, 2010 at 10:56 PM skat beat me to it,,nothing like the movie,,but all kidding aside now, a beautiful and sincerely enriching piece, I enjoyed your thoughts and message,,and Thank you for all your visits and for taking the time to leave your special words behind upon mine,,Blessings..Cecil

Caroline Cécile Delacroix September 10, 2010 at 7:07 PM Quite interesting Couplet, PD. You are good at those and point out quite well contradictions. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my latest. Best wishes, Caroline.

Skat A September 10, 2010 at 5:45 PM NoTHING LIKE THE MOVIE*luv~SKAT

Lisa Cooper September 10, 2010 at 3:08 PM nice pen

Gert W. Knop September 10, 2010 at 3:11 AM Wow, P.D., that's Soup Mail!!! Great selection of words!...Thank you for your comments and have a great weekend!...Gert

. Dabomb™ September 9, 2010 at 5:25 PM great rhyming! thanks for your nice comments, alway much appreciated! ;)

Jan Harvey September 9, 2010 at 3:01 PM Many views to consider, as here a firm step to enlightnement maybe."time in time out what's it all about?... clear and most assuredly will finds one's way. Thanks. Jan

David Smalling September 9, 2010 at 2:19 PM A real city slicker fave, it is not light the content that you write on, though. A very good show, friend

Carol Fillmore September 9, 2010 at 5:31 AM this is great! indeed this describes a land of the lost...sounds like rap (not that I have a great knowledge of that:) thanks for your comment on my recent post, and pleased to hear you enjoyed it:) am very appreciative!

Andrea Dietrich September 8, 2010 at 6:48 PM P.D. this has some interesting images and contrasts going on. My favorite couplets were the first one and the last one. So what made you think of all these things? Was it for Nathan down here who says. "this is so not about me?" hahaha. Oh, I also loved that one, LIving will , patient's bill. I totally relate to that one! LUv, Andrea

Hyle Chu September 8, 2010 at 6:31 PM "Time in time out" The land of the lost, would that be prison? Taking into account the hectic mechanical movement of a working society, those who fall out of pace fall out of place. In a way, the slackers end up in the land of the lost. Going in and out of jail and being a menace to his society. Maybe I'm just getting to deep, lol. Nice write.

Ryland Matthews September 8, 2010 at 4:10 PM Awesome Write. I enjoyed it very much and look forward to reading more from you ..... thanks

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