Land of the Living

Watched like a fool 
time grew bars around me.
A trapped  mind screamed
“too late to escape"!
Blocked by my last run
it brought me here.
Now I stand a lesser man. 
What I looked  for 
“I'll never find'!
The land of the living 
is killing my mind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 1, 2009 at 11:04 AM
John, you are still in the "land of the living." Thoughts and images cannot be confined by bars! You make a fine addition to the wonderful family here at Poetry Soup. Thank you for choosing to share with us. Best wishes, Carolyn
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March 1, 2009 at 8:24 AM
love this. the darkness, the imprisonment of time. i can relate. a dark deep poem
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