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Lamp Posts

Gently… 

lamp posts call me,

to sleep on rainfall’s quilt

as dewdrops, to misty stardust

calm breath.


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For Rick Parise: Old or New 8 line MAX
Re-entered  10/3/2016

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2015

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Skat A Date: 2/1/2015 2:31:00 PM NETTE, CONGRATULATIONS on your win *Love Sweet* SKAT Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 1/28/2015 9:29:00 AM Back to congratulate you, Nette! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/26/2015 3:49:00 PM !!! : > )...Way to go..Sara Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 1/26/2015 7:54:00 AM Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always,bl Login to Reply

Arlene Smith Date: 1/25/2015 7:40:00 PM Congrats on a great win, dear Nette!! hugs.. Arlene Login to Reply

David Mohn Date: 1/25/2015 4:19:00 PM These five lines create such a tangible mood...terrific writing Nette Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/25/2015 3:44:00 PM Very beautiful words, Nette. Congrats in my contest. Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/25/2015 3:34:00 PM For me this was one of the best. Congratulations Nette! Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 1/25/2015 3:21:00 PM Nette, congratulations on your win. A lovely image captured based on the visual. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 1/25/2015 1:44:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 1/16/2015 3:49:00 PM The imagery is beautiful; the scene calm, peaceful and alluring. Andrea will love this gem. // paul Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 1/26/2015 11:00:00 AM ...back with congratulations, Nette! Well done! // paul

Bl Devnath Date: 1/15/2015 10:28:00 AM Nice imagery it's beautifully pictured with golden color. Good luck in the contest. Loved always,bl Login to Reply

Maurice Yvonne Date: 1/14/2015 6:08:00 PM I imagine this will be at the top of the list of winners. Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 1/14/2015 8:05:00 AM A peaceful and dreamy image...I wish it was raining so I could take a little nap! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply

M. L. Kiser Date: 1/13/2015 9:52:00 PM Definitely one of my favorite's. Well done! Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 1/13/2015 5:45:00 PM I like this poem - it evokes night. I bought a lottery ticket tonight. One of the good things about NYC along with the light posts. Good luck in the contest - and in your life!! Login to Reply

Franco Gonza Date: 1/13/2015 2:10:00 PM So effortlessly strewn as your soft, soft lines invite me to rest and dream. A homerun of a poem, Nette Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/13/2015 1:32:00 PM - Oh, so lovely small poem, dear Nette - I wish you luck in the contest! - I have not participated in contest for a long time ...... boring to read the winning list, no surprises :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Frederic Parker Date: 1/13/2015 11:08:00 AM This poem describes serenity ...good luck my poetic friend Login to Reply

Isaiah Zerbst Date: 1/13/2015 10:22:00 AM Nette, this is the prettiest little poem I have seen for the contest yet! I wish you all the best. Login to Reply

David Meade Date: 1/13/2015 9:36:00 AM your words sooth my soul -- calling me to rest and breath deeply. Nicely done. 7 Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 1/13/2015 7:58:00 AM I can almost hear the pitter-patter of rain on that dim little lamp light..lovely Nette. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 1/13/2015 7:57:00 AM beautiful imagery Nette - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply