Nette Onclaud Poet Cinquain

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Lamp Posts

Gently… 

lamp posts call me,

to sleep on rainfall’s quilt

as dewdrops, to misty stardust

calm breath.


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For Rick Parise: Old or New 8 line MAX
Re-entered  10/3/2016

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Skat A February 1, 2015 at 2:31 PM NETTE, CONGRATULATIONS on your win *Love Sweet* SKAT

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 28, 2015 at 9:29 AM Back to congratulate you, Nette! Hugs, Rhonda

Sara Kendrick January 26, 2015 at 3:49 PM !!! : > )...Way to go..Sara

Bl Devnath January 26, 2015 at 7:54 AM Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Arlene Smith January 25, 2015 at 7:40 PM Congrats on a great win, dear Nette!! hugs.. Arlene

David Mohn January 25, 2015 at 4:19 PM These five lines create such a tangible mood...terrific writing Nette

Andrea Dietrich January 25, 2015 at 3:44 PM Very beautiful words, Nette. Congrats in my contest.

Richard Lamoureux January 25, 2015 at 3:34 PM For me this was one of the best. Congratulations Nette!

Sandra Haight January 25, 2015 at 3:21 PM Nette, congratulations on your win. A lovely image captured based on the visual. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison January 25, 2015 at 1:44 PM Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus January 16, 2015 at 3:49 PM The imagery is beautiful; the scene calm, peaceful and alluring. Andrea will love this gem. // paul Paul Callus January 26, 2015 at 11:00 AM ...back with congratulations, Nette! Well done! // paul

Bl Devnath January 15, 2015 at 10:28 AM Nice imagery it's beautifully pictured with golden color. Good luck in the contest. Loved always,bl

Maurice Yvonne January 14, 2015 at 6:08 PM I imagine this will be at the top of the list of winners.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 14, 2015 at 8:05 AM A peaceful and dreamy image...I wish it was raining so I could take a little nap! Hugs, Rhonda

M. L. Kiser January 13, 2015 at 9:52 PM Definitely one of my favorite's. Well done!

Matthew Anish January 13, 2015 at 5:45 PM I like this poem - it evokes night. I bought a lottery ticket tonight. One of the good things about NYC along with the light posts. Good luck in the contest - and in your life!!

Franco Gonza January 13, 2015 at 2:10 PM So effortlessly strewn as your soft, soft lines invite me to rest and dream. A homerun of a poem, Nette

Anne-Lise Andresen January 13, 2015 at 1:32 PM - Oh, so lovely small poem, dear Nette - I wish you luck in the contest! - I have not participated in contest for a long time ...... boring to read the winning list, no surprises :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker January 13, 2015 at 11:08 AM This poem describes serenity ...good luck my poetic friend

Isaiah Zerbst January 13, 2015 at 10:22 AM Nette, this is the prettiest little poem I have seen for the contest yet! I wish you all the best.

David Meade January 13, 2015 at 9:36 AM your words sooth my soul -- calling me to rest and breath deeply. Nicely done. 7

Charmaine Chircop January 13, 2015 at 7:58 AM I can almost hear the pitter-patter of rain on that dim little lamp light..lovely Nette.

Jan Allison January 13, 2015 at 7:57 AM beautiful imagery Nette - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx