Lament Ix

IX

"Not exactly Rumi...", he quipped, 
his words charged with full intent. 

"Rumi writes for everyone," she replied, 
"your words are meant for me alone." 

With that he knew she understood 
but one hundred and eighty-two rhymes 

could not make Time his soft master.                                                                                                         Yet one whisper from his beloved and age

melted away and he was Youth once more.
Warm Muskoka nights used to make 

him happy, now they make him cry. 
They were victims of a passion, raw,

not meant to endure; love became 
the disease instead of the cure. 

Round and round in dreams she went. 
"Woman, don't you know me?”, his lament

Let me sing to you a sweet melody 
designed to jog your fatal memory." 

Do you really think, Bok Hane, 
she could ever think of you again 
and smile?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Breedt Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 7:08 AM
...love the disease not the cure, what a turnaround. Thanks I enjoyed your poem and the lovely twists
Breedt Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 7:08 AM
...love the disease not the cure, what a turnaround. Thanks I enjoyed your poem and the lovely twists
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June 17, 2016 at 11:27 AM
Awesome Rant and use of RUMI (he's my fav tool too ;) on your poem. Hopefully my sis stops by later today to check out some of the new aweSome poems of today on Poetry soUP... I'm going to rate this one high. You expressed your feelings well, I hope tosee more of your flourishing writes. SkaT
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