Lament

He left and stole moon’s glow from the skies of July. Warm nights – I miss them so. Bereft am I.

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Ink Empress

Date: 10/17/2023 5:30:00 AM

I really loved reading this, there’s not just emotions but also imagery and depth and your choice of words and your title too is very creative and delivers such a soulful poem. “ stole moons glow from july skies” is very precise and tells us your story of grief and loss in such eloquence! Loved this one! Thank you for writing. Congratulations on winning

James Peranteau

Date: 10/16/2023 7:35:00 AM

i felt the loss dear poet....dannng, it's not for a contest...iz u iz or iz you ain't, okay now...whut? I care about the artist Andrea...have a pleasant week....much love, james

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/15/2023 2:22:00 AM

I suppose this is for some contest which I regret I am not following. Concise but well lamented. Best for a win. Hugs and blessings.