Lament
LAMENT
charred
ashen
debris
dust
&
tragedy
the broken
surrounds
the
burnt soil
suffering
significantly
lies
abandoned
rundown
slowly
voices
murmur
through the
degradation
simultaneously
passion
arrives
a
multifaceted
harvest
from
powerful
perspectives
alongside
a
beautifully
detailed
metaphor
of
rebirth
to
redemption
NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Copyright © Brian Strand
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