Lamb

As we sought the dawn knocking 
            The orator stood to address:
            'Peasants, He lamb cometh'.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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September 18, 2012 at 3:35 PM
Hi Sizo, a very traditional haiku,,, we shall wait for the LAMB". I love the style in your haiku.. xox~pd
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September 19, 2012 at 3:07 PM
Thank You PD. Am enjoying every minute I spend on this site. Great pool of minds here. Am lucky to be one of the few representing my country on this great stage :)
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September 16, 2012 at 4:58 AM
Thought and faith evoking! Can I post it on my blog fryktorein.blogspot.gr (Greek and English poems - post your comments, too)?
Hlophe Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 12:43 PM
Yeah, would really appreciate that. Thank you very much for stopping by.
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September 15, 2012 at 9:42 AM
I like the idea of the lamb coming to peasants, Sizo! He comes to his own.
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