Lamb

As we sought the dawn knocking The orator stood to address: 'Peasants, He lamb cometh'.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/18/2012 3:35:00 PM

Hi Sizo, a very traditional haiku,,, we shall wait for the LAMB". I love the style in your haiku.. xox~pd

Sizo Hlophe
Date: 9/19/2012 3:07:00 PM

Thank You PD. Am enjoying every minute I spend on this site. Great pool of minds here. Am lucky to be one of the few representing my country on this great stage :)

Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 9/16/2012 4:58:00 AM

Thought and faith evoking! Can I post it on my blog fryktorein.blogspot.gr (Greek and English poems - post your comments, too)?

Sizo Hlophe
Date: 9/16/2012 12:43:00 PM

Yeah, would really appreciate that. Thank you very much for stopping by.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2012 9:42:00 AM

I like the idea of the lamb coming to peasants, Sizo! He comes to his own.