Lalo

Always the odd ball
His family disowned him
Child of the unknown






















-I write about my past friends.

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Brittany Paradis

May 20, 2009 at 8:42 AM

Charmaine's comment is true, and NO Parent should disown their blood and hard work, the piece of them that needs a parent and family to live. I know what it is like to be disowned and i will NEVER EVER disown my own children or allow them to go through what i did or even anything similar to what i experienced.

Charmaine Chircop

May 19, 2009 at 4:35 AM

the odd ball can give surprises many times,child of the unknown--we all have a father -its GOD,THE ONE YOU AND I BELIEVE IN -this touched my heart,no parent should ever disown his own child,and if he does one day im sure he regrets it--charma

Nathan Leccese

May 18, 2009 at 8:09 PM

wow! This is deep. I love it! I know how he feels sometimes too.

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