Lalo

Always the odd ball His family disowned him Child of the unknown -I write about my past friends.

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Brittany Paradis

Date: 5/20/2009 8:42:00 AM

Charmaine's comment is true, and NO Parent should disown their blood and hard work, the piece of them that needs a parent and family to live. I know what it is like to be disowned and i will NEVER EVER disown my own children or allow them to go through what i did or even anything similar to what i experienced.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/19/2009 4:35:00 AM

the odd ball can give surprises many times,child of the unknown--we all have a father -its GOD,THE ONE YOU AND I BELIEVE IN -this touched my heart,no parent should ever disown his own child,and if he does one day im sure he regrets it--charma

Nathan Leccese

Date: 5/18/2009 8:09:00 PM

wow! This is deep. I love it! I know how he feels sometimes too.