Lalala

Deep in my mind
It stopped
Beating
Faster then ever
For you
Its winter
Im still melting
For you
Deep in my mind
It stopped
Still thinking
YOU.
Not moving
But spinning
Deep in my mind
It stopped
For you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
December 11, 2009 at 4:14 AM
Very interesting poetry you have posted today Ashlew. I enjoyed reading it. Wishing you the best always in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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December 10, 2009 at 3:21 AM
Lost love finally forgotten perhaps? Excellent write loved the last stanza.
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December 10, 2009 at 3:19 AM
Love love finally forgotten perhaps? Excellent write loved the last stanza.
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