Lakeside Sunset

dim clouds drift-
through a lavender sky

full moon floats-
in the deepening shade

as silvery stars-
appear with a sigh

like shimmering tears-
for a loon serenade.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
April 1, 2010 at 10:18 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Ron. Love, Carol
Green Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 9:03 PM
Oooh, I like this."as silvery stars appear with a sigh", great line!
Roberts Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 2:57 PM
beautiful
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