Lakeside

My heart is swelling in my throat 
Candid emotions trespassing this note...
Love is the only cure to my heart
A cloud of fire depicting my past 
Now that you have finally arrived, 
trust and care would dwell inside.
My eternal lover we are not born to die...till we meet by the lakeside.
.......

fantasyrhyme

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Paul Callus

April 1, 2016 at 3:32 PM

My type of poem...short, emotive and beautiful! One of these days we should mix ink:) hugs // paul

John-Ovan.P. Hull

March 12, 2016 at 9:55 AM

A perfect account of Love.

Poet Tacito

August 14, 2013 at 10:52 AM

You have a thing for the water & lakeside, as you often talk of it in your work, from what I've read so far. Waterfalls must be a massive rush for you, because it is for me. Excellent lines, once again!

John Loving Iii

August 12, 2013 at 11:51 PM

I'm here for you always .

John Loving Iii

August 12, 2013 at 10:50 PM

Well said. Where have you been?

Richard Lamoureux

August 12, 2013 at 10:26 PM

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Richard Lamoureux

August 12, 2013 at 9:09 PM

I see you are a romantic. I enjoyed your poem.

Poet Destroyer A

May 11, 2013 at 8:47 PM

Hi Red, have not seen you for a long time... :-) Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *Linda"

Vicky Tsiluma

December 29, 2012 at 1:35 AM

Beautiful write Red! The longing for love makes hope spring in the heart. Nice!

David Williams

December 28, 2012 at 8:28 AM

Red, Have a happy new year...lovely to see you...David

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 25, 2012 at 5:13 AM

Beautiful poem !!!!!! :) MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR,RED !!! * * * <3 * * * // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

December 24, 2012 at 10:15 AM

wow this amazing you are one that is missed on here, dear Red, and your poem, tells us why.... have a wonderful festive season...

David Williams

December 23, 2012 at 1:03 PM

Red, a Merry Christmas and peaceful time to you...David xx

Richard Lamoureux

December 18, 2012 at 6:54 PM

Stay away from the lake!!! Sorry just having a little fun. I enjoyed your poem.

David Williams

December 18, 2012 at 1:50 AM

Red, oh it is just great to see you back, this is just a stunningly romantic write, a wondeful image is now in my head and I like what I see...I was only thinking of you the other and wondering how you were doing, hope things are smoothing out, it really is great to see you here, Christmas is now complete, have a Peaceful holiday...David xx

Dan Kearley

December 17, 2012 at 8:54 PM

So nice to see you back again... :o) Another beautiful write to touch my <3 Thanks for stopping by,and commenting on my last write...I will take your words to heart,and leave it be. :o)