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Lakeside

Gentle sun has said goodbye.
The weeping willow cries itself to sleep.
A soothing breeze brings solace.



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
July 1, 2019 at 1:35 PM
Hello Lin, I think that when the winds blows that the weeping willow tree cries. Have a nice day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 12:31 PM
Yes they are. i do like them and to me they are beautiful trees. have a nice day my friend.
Gauthier Avatar
July 1, 2019 at 10:13 PM
Weeping willows are so endearing.
Krutsinger Avatar
June 30, 2019 at 11:58 AM
I have seen this, and it is true.
Gauthier Avatar
June 30, 2019 at 3:03 PM
So sad. That's when you know the weeping willow needs a hug.
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