Lake's Water

glistening, sparkling
incandescently bright blue
pool of mystery
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lamoureux Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 9:03 AM
I do enjoy a good mystery.
Hamilton Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 10:17 AM
ty Rick hugs
Melugin Avatar
February 15, 2014 at 10:13 PM
3 Lines...speak volumes 7 my best, chuck
Hamilton Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 5:10 AM
hi Chuck ty very much for enjoying it hugs
Mills-Kelly Avatar
February 15, 2014 at 4:10 PM
Beautiful Haiku !! :)
Hamilton Avatar
February 15, 2014 at 5:33 PM
ty again Debbie nice of to visit my work hugs
Rogers Avatar
February 15, 2014 at 1:01 PM
"Teach"...smile, I love the imagery you portray here-in. Love this, Linda!xoxoxo//Robert
Hamilton Avatar
February 15, 2014 at 3:25 PM
I know your weakness for this form ty Robert hugs
Kendrick Avatar
February 15, 2014 at 8:56 AM
Yes, what is in there?..Great work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
Hamilton Avatar
February 15, 2014 at 3:24 PM
ty Sara for your gracious comment hugs
Bolton Avatar
February 15, 2014 at 8:29 AM
I love this haiku, Shadow. It expresses your unique thoughts perfectly clear even though the lakes water is a pool of mystery. Love it. Uh, did I say I love it?
Hamilton Avatar
February 15, 2014 at 8:46 AM
lol Jerry you did ty what a lovely comment hugs
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