Lake Louise

LAKE    LOUISE



Early  April   is  a  preview  of heaven
And  my  sin-soaked soul is  forgiven
At  Lake Louise.    I offer praise fulsome
To the breeze,  unladen by debt or ransom.


A few early crocus in warm shelter
Air diamond-clear  to see forever
Colours with new-born brightness
Pristine snow of  Eden freshness.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 6:04 PM
Enjoyed reading today!
Mehta Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 3:22 PM
Nice expression quite poetic - sin-soaked soul, enjoyed the couplets. Sydney
Kendrick Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 3:06 PM
Great descriptive and expressive write..Sara
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