Lake Elisa

Lake Eliza
Out by poor old  Lake Elisa lived a moody ancient miser.
Who bemoaned his fate throughout the livelong day.
lived further west than Isa out where the heat and flies are.
So he plotted as he moaned "I'll find a way?".
Oh this fellow loved a lady one Cherolyn O'Grady,
so besotted while he sauntered from insanity to mad.
For it seems she was his sister Joe O'Grady never kissed her,
She'd run off to Coolgardie selling favours to the sad.
Oh it seems his mind could wander,
through the desert just out yonder.
It got sunstruck when his hat it blew away.
In his youth there'd been a Rhonda.
Who'd enticed him made him fonder.
But the tribe had gone on walkabout the next day .
Though really none the wiser, he set out from the Isa,
Went to Brisbane met a shiela sweet and gay.
It was down in the Valley, she had whiskers this O'Malley,
blue round the jowls, Joe loved her anyway.
She took him home to her place into the bedroom they raced,
Joe's mouth it opened slackjawed in suprise .
For it seems she wasn't dinkum through the haze of grog he's drinking.
Saw parts of her to trade for many lies.
This city woman strange wanted money had no change,
Took his fifty as she pushed him out the door .
Hooked like a dog to mange, could a wedding he arrange? 
But she dumped him anyhow cos Joe was poor. 
So back to Lake Elisa went this sodden whinging miser.
Drowning sorrows O.P. rum, drinking bottles by the score,
Just a little sad but wiser, now he'd never leave Elisa.  So he drank himself to death
there by her shore...by Don Johnson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
October 8, 2011 at 2:20 PM
Congrats Don on your epitaph being featured. Vince
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October 7, 2011 at 1:16 AM
Congrats DON on featured poem this week on PS.. a wonderful write to share with us all my friend with luv...xoxo..
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October 3, 2011 at 11:57 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Don. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 6:43 PM
Dear Carol, I don't know where to look, for the feature hook, i'm just a sook sometimes...
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October 26, 2010 at 7:40 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with its creative theme luv.. hope u check out the contest page offered to new members ..good luck with luv..
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October 25, 2010 at 6:54 PM
Wow, wow again. brilliant write
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October 25, 2010 at 12:39 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Don. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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