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Lake Cliffs of Erie

Standing on the edge of a cliff toking a smooth fat spliff waiting to catch sight of a skiff Floating it's way on by Watching the majestic girl soar no longer a beast of lore wish for increasingly more She passes a look on the fly Brown with white head and tail power that will never fail enchanting how she sets sail Makes me start to cry Bounding stag hidden by ivied hoods sneaky 'lil squirrel dashing with his goods amber kits darting through the boxwoods Violet western sun in the sky

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/4/2018 5:10:00 PM
What a perfect poem, chalk-full of things I love in nature!
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Date: 5/9/2017 5:01:00 PM
Such a beautiful way to describe nature. Well done.
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Date: 5/9/2017 3:37:00 PM
I adore the second stanza. Something about it makes me feel light and uplifted- even though that isn't necessarily its goal, I think your prose is beautiful and those simple lines make me smile. This entire poem is gorgeous. Thank you so much for sharing!!
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Date: 3/7/2017 9:59:00 PM
Refreshing pace and style. This is a very enjoyable piece. :)
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Keith Osborne
Date: 3/8/2017 8:29:00 PM
I am truly happy that you found it so. Thank you for taking your time to read and comment on it.

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