Shadow Hamilton Poet Haiku

Lake

shimmering blue lake
waters crystal clear and bright
your taste divine

reflections of cloud
floating across azure skies
mirrored by lake

flashes of silver
as  a greedy trout  swims by
ignoring the hook

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Cherl Dunn January 6, 2014 at 9:52 AM Beautiful and very discriptive, love your choose of words and the feeling they make one visualize. cheri

Sara Kendrick January 6, 2014 at 6:30 AM One smart fish..Great descriptive work about that trout..Thanks for the visit to my page..I have wondered and wait also on my work "The Hands Of Time"..Don't know which way I will go with it yet..Sara

Russell Sivey January 5, 2014 at 7:34 PM This is a wonderful series of Haiku my friend! You have delighted me by the splendor of this incredible poem this evening! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!! Shadow Hamilton January 6, 2014 at 6:23 AM ty so much Russell really appreciate your feedback Shadow x smile hug