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shimmering blue lake waters crystal clear and bright your taste divine reflections of cloud floating across azure skies mirrored by lake flashes of silver as a greedy trout swims by ignoring the hook

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Date: 1/6/2014 9:52:00 AM
Beautiful and very discriptive, love your choose of words and the feeling they make one visualize. cheri
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Date: 1/6/2014 6:30:00 AM
One smart fish..Great descriptive work about that trout..Thanks for the visit to my page..I have wondered and wait also on my work "The Hands Of Time"..Don't know which way I will go with it yet..Sara
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Date: 1/5/2014 7:34:00 PM
This is a wonderful series of Haiku my friend! You have delighted me by the splendor of this incredible poem this evening! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/6/2014 6:23:00 AM
ty so much Russell really appreciate your feedback Shadow x smile hug