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poem submitted to "Nature Haiku-Ocean, Lake, or River" poetry contest, Tania Kitchin, sponsor, July 23, 2026

lake

still lake at daybreak~  
single ripple wandering
toward pure silence
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Gauthier Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 1:10 PM
beautiful ~
Smith  Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 9:48 PM
The serenity portrayed in this well worded haiku is beautiful. Even a small ripple is wondering towards silence.
Hind Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 8:23 PM
gorgeous <3
Scragg Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 12:44 PM
Beautiful tranquility. Love the imagery of a single ripple heading towards silence ... lovely :-D
Goldsmith Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 12:32 PM
Your "lake" is a wonderful haiku write with a pretty picture. "Good Luck" I did, "river." Have a wonderful day writing away................
Andresen Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 12:07 PM
- A lovely haiku, Sara ... enjoying the silence :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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