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Lai Dig

playing in the dirt
better than dessert
fun toys
starting to exert 
sweating through my shirt
life’s joys
don’t want to get hurt
better stay alert
whoa, boys!

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a Lai is a pretty easy 9-liner with 5a-5a-2b-5a-5a-2b-5a-5a-2b:

https://www.writersdigest.com/write-better-poetry/lai-poetic-forms

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Date: 10/14/2022 2:32:00 PM
Looks like you're having lots of fun with different forms! Enjoyed this!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/14/2022 3:11:00 PM
I am indeed! Thanks for reading/commenting!

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