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Lahaina, Hawaii

LaHaina So far away But near my heart So long ago Drawing a memory strong There by a young mans adventure Still there now an old mans dreams

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Caryl Muzzey

Date: 6/18/2010 6:24:00 PM

A very nice write, I enjoyed the read. A great piece of work. Caryl

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/18/2010 2:42:00 PM

This is excellent. It's always good to have wonderful memories. I like the ending lines very much. Great job! Joseph

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/18/2010 2:27:00 PM

A very sweet nostalgic tone to this poem, Nigel. Couldn't help but think of the song "Bali Hai" from the musical "South Pacific." The island of Bali Hai could just as easily have been LaHaina -- it fits the mood of the song so well. Great work! Love, Carolyn