Lahaina

So far away 
(from me now)
But near my heart

So long ago 
(almost seeming just) 
Sketched enrapt memories 

There by a young mans adventure
(memories distilled to affection)
Still there now an older mans dreams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 3, 2011 at 6:34 AM
I am enjoying reading the many diverse poems written by the many wonderful poets writing and sharing here at PoetrySoup today. I am happy that yours was among the ones I had the pleasure to read Nigel. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 2:53 PM
Awesome and intriguing write, enjoyed it, Nigel
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