Hathor Ammutlinra Poet Haiku

Lady~of~the~west

~                                                          Hathor                                                             ~


~                                                    symbolic, rattle                                                       ~
~                                                  goddess of fertility                                                     ~
~                                                    graceful horizon                                                       ~

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Skat A November 19, 2015 at 9:05 PM Awesome

Poet Destroyer A December 11, 2013 at 1:38 AM Graceful

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet January 16, 2011 at 1:51 PM Oh such a terrific haiku.Thanks for your very kind comment.~LUV~Teresa

Andrea Dietrich January 14, 2011 at 10:04 PM aha, you want to have lots of kids then? I love that last line. ARe you in America? Luv,Andrea Ps. I'll save your very first post to read later!!

Gert W. Knop January 9, 2011 at 9:21 AM Well done, Lin-Ra! keep the mystery flowing!...Gert

Fabiyas M V January 7, 2011 at 6:18 AM Beautiful Haiku!.I really enjoyed it ,Hathor

Andrea Dietrich December 27, 2010 at 8:17 AM I was rereading this one (think I read all your poetry, Hathor) Did you ever answer me where you live? I love the line here "graceful horizon!"

David Smalling December 27, 2010 at 7:54 AM Compares to my poem on the Lizard, same mystique. I am enjoying your haikus

Andrea Dietrich November 29, 2010 at 9:46 PM Where are you from, Hathor? And that is nice I saw this. I was unfamiliar with your name and was thinking it might be male. What country are you from? Or are you right here in the USA?

Royal Trevino November 13, 2010 at 1:35 AM The after bite has comes with power I see. =(^.^)= Royal

Doris Culverhouse November 12, 2010 at 10:52 AM welcome to the soup...and thank you for your comment on my work!!

Sheri Fresonke Harper November 12, 2010 at 10:31 AM Interesting, it reminds me of your next haiku with the trees swaying

Adell Foster November 11, 2010 at 9:07 AM A very interesting haiku indeed Lin~Ra, such facinating imagery captured within so few lines. I thank you for sharing the read and for your most welcomed comments on 'Willow' ... Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Nette Onclaud November 10, 2010 at 6:24 PM wonderful use of each word, lin-ra. great 'ku ...thanks for sending me a special note in my winter haiju.. warmest, nette

Sara Kendrick November 10, 2010 at 2:46 PM Interesting work..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting..Sara

Matthew Anish November 10, 2010 at 1:09 PM Nice\, mystical feeling in thsi one. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Dr.Ram Mehta November 10, 2010 at 12:49 PM I ejoiyed the haiku with nice images to convey your thought, and thanks for your comments on my work, Hathor

Carolyn Devonshire November 10, 2010 at 10:35 AM Very interesting haiku, Hathor. The reader can see the godess on the horizon through your description. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy the time you spend here sharing your poetry. Best wishes, Carolyn