Ladybug

Quiet humming Wings flying Six legs Landing on a leaf Red backdrop Black polka dots Splattered across the top Dainty Crawling slowly along Carefree Time to enjoy nature's display Observe the Lady

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Anthony Amero

Date: 5/19/2010 7:59:00 PM

Heck, I don't know what it is either, but I like it. Thanks for your comments on my work, I Want to be Pinocchio. I responded by posting to myself by mistake - duh! - so if you want to read what I replied, go back and read it. And thanks for reading. I've read a few others of your work. I like your raw emotion and descriptions. Good stuff. I admit to being lazy, though, and not always commenting. Sorry. Tony