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Lady of Paris

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Into the night I marched Into deaths grip I fell Musical notes running after me Violins weeping afterwards Stars fading into matter Nothing matters without love Lights shine over there Can I reach or do I dare? I can’t get out of this repressive chair I can’t stand the people whom stare My mind is all wrapped in shrouds Hiding within the skies dark clouds My smiles stolen by royalty golden Now my tears flow as I weep Is there any hope to keep? Or am I doomed to deaths grip so deep Gargoyles yelping for their fare Me, dangling from the air Aurore are you there?............

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/1/2017 12:40:00 PM

An inner battle but hopefully she will not kill you so that means she is still there. lol Nicely done. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2017 7:52:00 PM

My, another hauntingly sad one. It implies a hanging death I think. The image of the gargoyles both in your picture and in the poem was gothic brilliance.

Claudia Polydoro

Date: 1/29/2017 2:17:00 PM

Great poem, Arthur... It calls to me... really deep...

Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/29/2017 4:33:00 PM

Thank you Claudia! :)

Jean Murray

Date: 1/28/2017 4:22:00 PM

Yes, she's there . Don't let go.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/28/2017 7:40:00 PM

Only thing left is the breeze of cold air!

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/25/2017 11:44:00 AM

Hi Arthur, there is indeed a over arching.. An Aurore of the emphatic & empathy in this piece, ambiguity chases candour, yet this despite a brooding angle is not dour.'

Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/28/2017 7:40:00 PM

Thanks Joe!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/22/2017 9:13:00 PM

Quite an interesting write! Enjoyed!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/28/2017 7:24:00 PM

Thank you so much Kim!

Tim Smith

Date: 1/22/2017 8:49:00 AM

A heartfelt inner battle....I hope she's there.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/28/2017 7:24:00 PM

She is, in part 2 she will probably kill me!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/22/2017 7:34:00 AM

- Powerfully great writing, Arthur ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/28/2017 7:23:00 PM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise!

Paul Callus

Date: 1/22/2017 7:12:00 AM

Tears and weeping violins reflect the loss/lack of love; is death a solution? The Gothic touch conveyed by the gargoyles contributes to this type of dark poetic effect. Again...will dawn bring some sort of relief? // paul

Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/28/2017 7:21:00 PM

Thanks Paul, the comments inspired an almost sequel!! :)

Darren White

Date: 1/21/2017 10:30:00 PM

Strong, powerful, dark and scary... I feel this and I can feel the despair. Great poetry, this!

Darren White
Date: 1/22/2017 3:07:00 AM

It means more to me, but cannot say :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/21/2017 10:31:00 PM

Thank you Darren, appreciate your kind words!