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Lady Love

Hot and spicy that is what you are calling all cars to come from a far swinging those hips with the sound of the wind and banking on making some guy more than just a friend Bringing them in with the sultry sound of your voice and as the romance enhances the two shall rejoice That look that often kills and gives all the guys chills You give them all great thrills that they start throwing hundred dollar bills. You see down to there soul with those eyes as black as coal, your so good at playing your role that all of their hearts you have now stole. Hotsy Totsy contest 2/22/15

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Date: 2/24/2015 7:34:00 AM
"swinging those hips with the sound of the wind"... great line dear Gwen! Great write... huggsies, Jack xxx
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Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
Date: 2/27/2015 12:32:00 PM
Thank you Jack, shoulda known you'd like that. : )
Date: 2/22/2015 2:17:00 PM
Well written with a sassy wit. Emile #7
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Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
Date: 2/22/2015 8:45:00 PM
Thank you much Emile
Date: 2/22/2015 1:17:00 PM
You stole my heart and soul Gwen,nicely done..tonytocaa
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Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
Date: 2/22/2015 8:43:00 PM
Thanks Tonytocaa, appreciate it
Date: 2/22/2015 1:14:00 PM
love the imagery and the rhyme - good luck:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
Date: 2/22/2015 8:42:00 PM
Thank you Jan

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