Lady Ann

Women a lot, but you are one. Many desires, but you - a dream! Without you I'm just someone who And I'm with you - Infinity I - heaven! I am powerful, when I see you, I am weak and delicate, when you're around breathe And a miracle in my life was, When you suddenly I fell in love.

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/25/2013 8:53:00 PM

Dear Nick, I can understand YOUR POETRY quite well but some here may have a hard time with the positioning of YOUR words. I live in America and we place our verbs differently then YOU do. Where are YOU from? I read some of the Titles in YOUR future POEMS and see Lady Ann is close to YOUR Heart. Keep Writing. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

Nick Dylan
Date: 3/27/2013 7:11:00 AM

I'm from Ukraine. I know that the grammar I have a problem that's why I ask that I be corrected. We have a word order is not that important that you will seem strange) Nick