Lady

Lady, In me you did inspire This poem like wildfire-- For your beauty is so deep You make me feel small and meek-- From me my heart you did rend Because from heaven you did descend

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/12/2013 10:01:00 PM

HI, Gabe, i like the way one can inspire such fire in others. it is sweet... and somehow I love the rhyming couplets.... xox...PD

Gabe Shelly
Date: 7/15/2013 7:31:00 AM

Thanks. g.

Toshia Hall

Date: 7/11/2013 10:23:00 PM

I've read your "love" poems and I honestly have to say you were right. I can see why you said people like them. They are all so beautiful and they belong in their own special collection! (Yes, I'm a sucker for love poems! :D ) Oh, and I replied to your message but I don't know if it sent. Let me know if you get it or not.

Gabe Shelly
Date: 7/12/2013 9:14:00 AM

Thanks. g.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/11/2013 11:07:00 AM

- Gabe, sooo sweet ! - Well done in rhyme! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Gabe Shelly
Date: 6/11/2013 11:09:00 AM

Thanks, please read some more. gabe