Lady

Lady Eyes green and blue, Hair curled and groomed. The whitest skin you can see, The finest brush strokes, An artist captured her soul. To see is to behold, To love is to adore, To warship it’s a must, Such beauty one mustn’t touch. Listen to my heart beating so fast This is me I was a man And now I’m just a child.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/8/2013 9:00:00 PM

ALI, wow... I'm impressed you took us from the deep to the open of you... memories, and reliving for the new... I love this poem..expressed with tender...love~LINDA

Ali Hammoud
Date: 1/9/2013 12:42:00 AM

Hi Linda, again thank you! When we are in love we become like children. Life turns into a magical world you love all people, you walk tall. Don't you think? It puts you in perfect harmony with everything. It's all white! No hate, no anger it's just loveeeeeeeeee hehehe

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 1/8/2013 12:24:00 PM

I likwe this. It reads good. There was song that said - I'm too old for girls and too young for women. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Ali Hammoud
Date: 1/9/2013 12:46:00 AM

Hi Lucilla, Nice song I must try to find it! Thanks, Love Ali